In his article, Fulwiler touches on four main suggestions peer tutors can make in order to help their peer's paper improve, even when all other comments fall flat. These ideas which can be suggested are limiting, adding, switching, and transforming.
1) Limiting: focusing your writing on a specific subject. Avoid any vague phrases, and keep your writing goal oriented, focusing on the thesis and keeping sentences relevant and specific to the subject at hand.
2) Adding:
3) Switching: switching the point of view of the paper at hand to give it a more exciting twist. (ie. change from 1st to 3rd person) this can give the paper a new fresh flow and can sometimes show new activities throughout the story if shown from another person's eyes.
4) transforming:
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